December 4
No one ever talks about the locomotive hearse the Scrooge sees going up the steps before him!
Also I think there might be a typo:
"...in a lowering pile of building up a yard.."
(I'm guessing "building" should be plural.)
I like the way he writes about Scrooge searching the room. It gives that feeling of anxiety, when you think someone could be in the house.
No one ever talks about the locomotive hearse the Scrooge sees going up the steps before him!
Also I think there might be a typo:
"...in a lowering pile of building up a yard.."
(I'm guessing "building" should be plural.)
I like the way he writes about Scrooge searching the room. It gives that feeling of anxiety, when you think someone could be in the house.